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You're very welcome! Wow, it's a story-seption, flashback over flashback XD That sounds really interesting though, it makes the plot look that much bigger to me

Hi! Thank you very much for reviewing, it helped a lot. I will keep in mind what you said, and perhaps I shall publish an edited, longer, version eventually. Thank ...

Hi! Thanks for pointing those mistakes out, I've fixed them. Thank you for taking the time to review, have a nice day!

Glad I could help ;)

Yeah, when I first started writing stories I never re-read them and posted without checking, but it helps a lot to find simple errors and maybe you get new ideas ...

ah yes, the only thing I didn't change is "and then the clicking began to break the silence", as it's only the clicks the guns make once loaded, but it ...

I'm glad you liked it :D I fixed what you found, thanks for the help, and thanks for reading!

Thank you very much for the review, I really appreciate it, and I'm happy you enjoyed my story. I fixed the grammar problems you found, and changed the sentence where ...

Hey! This is truly amazing and interesting. The dialogs were fantastic, I liked the ending very much, very good cliffhanger, very emotional, and when i read it again it was ...

Hi! (Extremely late reply, sorry). Thank you very much for reviewing! I corrected all of the mistakes you pointed out, except for one: substituting his with its when referring to ...

Hi! Thanks for reading and reviewing! I fixed all the grammar errors you found, and I'll try to fix this so it won't be as confusing. Oh, and the first ...

Hi! I must say this is probably the best review I have received so far, it really helps. Thank you for taking the time to read, I'm glad you liked ...

Ah, yes. The details about the Souls and Guardianships will come along in the next chapter. Also, this is the first chapter, but there is a prologue before it. Would ...

Hi! Thanks for the review, it really helps. I read the story again and I found and fixed may grammatical errors, I'll edit it to fix what you pointed out ...

Hi! Thank you for taking the time to read! ok, then: Point.1 Yeah, I have a problem with spelling, I tried my best, but I'll read it again to find ...