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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Violent Roses (the first 2 pages.)

    Could have used a much better choice of words. Some punctuation and grammar might be lacking, and everything seemed to happen a bit fast. On the other hand, the story ...

    Apr 8, 2010
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: Lost, the Revolutionary

    For the most part a good choice of words. Entertaining. It is a good thing you brought it in for a review because it needs to be revised. There were ...

    Apr 8, 2010


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