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  • Short Story » Horror, Supernatural Re: The Black Husk

    Hey, Lozrent! I like your name. Welcome to YWS! So, I really do like this. I'm guessing it's an analogy for depression? I'm pretty sure... I'm not sure why the ...

    Jan 20, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Ruby of Revenge [Part 1]

    Hello, Lightsong! Here's your review, as promised! Alright. This is part one of this piece? I think it needs to start somewhere else. Not that the first paragraph didn't make ...

    Jan 17, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: Marijuana: Chapter 1: The First Hit

    Alrighty. I like this, but here's the thing: You describe pot like it's a hard drug. Like Meth or LSD or something. But pot isn't addictive. No side effects, no ...

    Jan 9, 2016


My tongue must tell the anger of my heart, or else my heart, concealing it, will break...
— Katherine, The Taming of the Shrew