SeleneForeverDream

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Hey Dark Sploosh (nice name, by the way ;)), welcome to YWS! So I see that Rosey and Shauni have already told you about the rules, so I'll just give ...

Well this was a very interesting short story, which was very enjoyable, even if it was a bit gory. Oh, and congrats on actually posting in the romantic section. I ...

Welcome to YWS, Aquaman! I see that you've already been informed on the rules, but here's some other friendly tips: 1.) Grammar, spelling and punctuation should be checkeded with each ...

Wow, I really enjoyed this. The only nit-picks I have is the punctuation in you third verse. This probably isn’t something you wanna hear , It’s not really something I ...

Nicole I saw Jack for a fleeting moment before diving into the chaos. Debris rained everywhere

Grace Jewel My clay sculpture was beautiful. Actually, I think it could have been possibly beyond beautiful. It was a graceful female wolf, one you would find in fantasy novels. ...

Daniel I had been on my way to Health class in the Hospital Wing when I had heard the commotion. A girl older than I heard it too and followed ...

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Name: Emily Rose Rank: Airman First Class Airship: Fighter Falcon Power: Freedom Fighters Age: 17 Personality: She is a very fierce young woman and can either seem harsh to those ...

Name: Nicole Dremonty Gender: Female Age: 19 Special ability: Heals and is virtually invincible. She is also a skilled fighter, even though her soft looks may deceive you. What they ...

Thanks for the reviews everyone. :D Music- I'll have to work on Jason's description, but you got right down to the point. He's a nerdy, popular boy, not a usual ...

*I had a dream about this storybook and my boyfriend was there and everything... very awkward... Just thought I'd let you know, because I suppose the idea was just so ...

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Thanks for the reviews guys! :D Ashleylee- Yeah, I'll have to fix Jason's character, but it's true, he is confusing. This is all in Jen's POV, so she's new to ...