SeleneForeverDream

Hiya hisangel! Welcome to the wonderful YWS! Nice poem you have here. Mind if I nit-pick it a bit? Nit-Picks- it camptivates your very beings, You meant 'captivates' with "camptivates," ...

Hiya TNG100! I'm Selene and am happy to be at your service. *bows* I hope I can help! Nit-Pickiness: NO! This would look a lot more professional if it was ...

Hey Qgadia. I'm Selene and I'll be your reviewer today. ^_^ Stanza-by-Stanza: Inscriptions on stone may fade, But bonds of the heart never do, It is your heart I’ll make ...

Hiya Taytay and welcome to YWS. I don't believe we've met before *shakes hand* I'm Selene and I'll be your reviewer this evening. :D I. Nit-Picks "If the guys look ...

Hey Tiffany! *waves hand* I'm back again. I. Nit-Picks It also didn’t help that she had an astronomic fear of going to any kind of doctor, any where. Join "any ...

Heya Lisa! *shakes hand* I don't believe we've met before. I'm Selene. ^_^ Pleasure meeting you. I. Nit-Picks At 6'5”, my Da was a giant of a man. But gentle ...

Hiya Hans! I'm here to review just like I said I'd be. ^_^ I. Nit-Picks The three Jonas kids were sitting in their sort of bland living room, the late ...

Hey pinkangel! Sorry it took me awhile to review this... but I'm here now! :D I. Nit-Picks Darling… I can’t believe this honey Baby… I miss you Can’t you see ...

Heya Rascalover! I'm here to review as requested. ^_^ Let's get down to it! I. Nit-Picks “ Ya know, for a minute I thought you were going to throw the ...

Hiya Kate! I'm back for more. ^_^ Nit-Picks: But I'm getting of myself, the confrontation with Xenos, my love, is not the beginning of my story, nor is it the ...

Hiya Pinkangel! I'm Selene, and I don't believe we've met before. *shakes hand* Nice to meet you. ^_^ I. Nit-Picks He stokes my passion, Helping me find the beauty in ...

Hiya SilverSun! I'm here, as requested, and am ready to critique! :D I. Nit-Picks I snuck through the open hall quietly, the scent of dusk settling uneasily on my tongue. ...

Hey Incog! Me again. ^_^ Nit-Picks : I glanced over to see James with his arms around me, face scrutinized into a grimace of pain as the car rode over ...

Hiya Incog! Selene's here to [s]shred[/s] critique your work! ^_^ Nit-Picks : I ran, my breath appearing before me in cloudy wisps in the frigid night air. I was expecting ...

Hiya Kat! Yay, you posted chapter one so quickly! :D Nit-Picks : As soon as her feet touched the cheap pearl carpet, that covered the room's floor area, the tingly ...