SeptemberLove

I love this! Its so sweet, simple, and straight to the point. All the while being a pretzel in and of itself and making you pause re read and figure ...

Hello! This is such a lovely topic to write about- though how sad and mournful it is. It is very often used however. YOur poem was- at best- generic. It ...

That left me breathless!!! Your imagery is astonishing! You captured the scene with a simplicity that was truly complex and meaningful, if you can understand my oxymoron of a review! ...

Hello! I'll begin by saying you made me cry! Here I am reluctant to leave the last half of your poem. As a high school senior I fear all that ...

Haha :) fun and enlightening! As I read it I could hear myself doing the same when I pack! Very real and the flow and texture is very pleasant. :) ...

Can I be honest here? This made me cry. :_( I loved it. Utterly and inexplicably, because it spoke to the depths that make growing up so hard. It's like ...

I thought this was very beautiful :) I loved the writing- I have no idea why you say you aren't very good!!- but I hated it at the same time! ...

This definitely made me smile and chuckle to myself a little :) that made my day and its only 30mins in! :D I had to check the other reviews to ...

Hits home. Love lasts longer than the relationship it's self. Sad but sometimes true. Great job, and it is possible to love more than one person. :) if you truly ...

Amazing. You clearly stated what is the simple truth- love is above words. Even for us writers who find words our easiest tool of expression. You captured that lost feeling ...

Again- I am astonished at your ability to manipulate words. They are clearly like putty in your hands. This one really hit home. I believe that while you should not ...

I love it. Sometimes I feel like people are trying to put me down as something- a jock, a geek, a nerd, a musician, or a cynic, when really I'm ...