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Re: Check in - 2559 words
The first paragraph is well-written: “Mr William Swindler, or Billy, as he’d written in the guestbook, waltzed into the room like he’d been there before. He was a well-dressed young ...
Nov 17, 2020 -
Re: Dark Corners, Bright Spaces: 2.1 (Peter)
In the first sentence: "Luna's text last night that all appeared fine with my computer and that I could pick it up today at the help desk was reassuring to ...
Nov 17, 2020