SeraphVesna

I'm pretty sure my computer went crazy and posted my reply before it was complete. The last thing I was going to say is that I can't really take all ...

I guess that can be confusing. When I write the scenes play out a bit like a movie in my head so I was grouping the sounds to the actions ...

It scares me that the one thing people seem to dislike about this prologue is a quality that I was intentionally going for. If it helps these characters do not ...

Took your advice about the page break. I never thought about it being a problem, thanks for mentioning it. The first chapter is now up. I'd love it if you ...

I do apologize for the cliche. It's a bit of a Neo-Victorian theme so I was trying to channel my inner Romanticism writer. But the compliment helped soften the blow. ...