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Seraphania

  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Escaping the Lost City....

    Hey there. I'm Ari, and I'll be your reviewer today. I'm in a rush so I can't go line-by-line, but I'll give you a detailed overview of what I think. ...

    Feb 3, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Logan, Necromancer Chapter one

    Hey there, I'm Ari, and I'll be your reviewer today. I'm in a hurry so I can't go line-by-line, but here are some tips for you. - In the beginning ...

    Jan 24, 2009
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read

    The Clique by Lisi Harrison. It's TERRIBLE, and the other books in the series are even worse. That's all I can really say about it before I start to yell ...

    Jan 19, 2009
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: What is the Best Book you have read...

    The Underland Chronicles, by Suzanne Collins. Same author as The Hunger Games. I love these books. They're not perfect, but the concept is amazing and the characters are really well ...

    Jan 19, 2009
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read

    Darnit, I think we might have to read that for school soon. Now I'm suspicious. I despise whining. aye, don't let your teacher tell you it's a great book. You ...

    Jan 18, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Salvation's Show

    Funny, if a tad insulting (yes, I am a Christian :p). Even so, I liked it. My only advice is to change the line about the cash a bit; it ...

    Jan 14, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: My mind is broken v_v

    I'd go with the boy, myself. Being a teenage girl, seeing a guy my own age would haunt me more than a guy without a face, for some reason. I ...

    Jan 13, 2009
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Run

    As always, I tried my best to ignore the summons. 'Summons' is a good word here, but I'm not sure if the tense is right, or the number. "Summoning that ...

    Jan 12, 2009
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: The Hunger Games

    I haven't read this yet, but I'm a huge fan of Collin's other series, The Underland Chronicles. I'd suggest you read them as well; they're really good. That's the Unofficial ...

    Jan 11, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Lyrria; The Beginning- The Dream

    First thing: I love the name. *steals* Okay, I won't steal it, but it's really pretty. The title's what drew me in in the first place. Her heart was going ...

    Nov 3, 2008
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Brisingr (Eragon 3) Spoiler

    I'll be honest. I think I'm a better writer than Paoilini. Heck, I know that I'm a better writer. I'm not arrogant; it's a fact. Most of us here are ...

    Oct 29, 2008
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Twilight - A Reality.

    Hah. This was actually very funny, but I do have an odd sense of humour. Just a few things, though: - I'd suggest a little bit more detail in the ...

    Oct 23, 2008


I have lived through much, and now I think I have found what is needed for happiness. A quiet secluded life in the country, with the possibility of being useful to people to whom it is easy to do good... then rest, nature, books, music, love for one's neighbor - such is my idea of happiness.
— Leo Tolstoy