Seraphim

Welll i like the plot but You need more detail. I also tihnk that the angels not knowing how to work human things is kind of lame. But please write ...

Looks interesting so far. I don't know really what to tell you except to watch out for the run on sentances. Please write more

I'm sorry to anyone eho has read this but I am kicking the idea. But I have a better one that I am working on so don't worry.

Thank you both for your help

I really like this and it has a nice twist. However it was a little confusing at times and the attachable re-tachable wing I'm not feeling it that well but ...

I liked it very much, but still you need more depth into it like everyone else said.

Looks good do far; few grammatical mistakes but it happens to the best of us.

This is really good but like Cade said try to make the expirences in the poems a little more personal so it will hook your readers

Like the others said kput in more detail whithout giving too much away but still a good start and souonds interesting.