Seraphinaxx

Thanks for the review. Good things have been happening for Sebastian in chapter 1 which is what he is referring to. Thanks for the tips on how to make him ...

ok cool :D

Sorry if that ending was a bit confusing. It's meant to be Lloyd saying it while Lyn is talking to Morden in the background, but sorry that wasn't clearer.

Cool thanks :D

Thanks for the review :D. I'm glad you thought I did well with the dialogue as getting it too flow is one of the things I find the hardest.

Thanks for the review :)

Thanks so much :D

Thanks for the review :) Eridan is one of my favourite characters in Homestuck and I wanted to try something from his point of view. I'm glad you liked it.

Thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked my plot twist and didn't think it was too improbable. :)

Thanks for the review. I think I do have a tendency to use too many commas in my writing, so I'll try and use less from now on.

Thanks for the points. I'll try and add a bit more detail in later chapters :)

Thanks for the review :)

Thanks for the review. :) You were a little off on the bounty hunter thing, but what the Taker actually does is going to be explained in better detail later. ...

Thanks, knowing what I'm doing well is probably just as important as knowing what I'm doing wrong. :)

Thanks for the review. I'm more of an encourager too :)