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Sevenity

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Dark Innocence(Edited)

    Hi there! Let's start with cons... You switch from first-person to third-person. In some cases, it might make sense, but the reason why it's unnatural here is because Lord Ashzen ...

    Feb 1, 2012
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Finding Alana

    Hello! I like the premise. It's ridiculous :) 25 kids? Anyway, with reviews I like to start with cons, so we can end on a good note. Speaking of "good ...

    Jan 24, 2012


Daddy Long Legs are more closely related to crabs than spiders and somehow the idea of crablike creatures with spider legs that have escaped the entrappings of the primordial sea and now crawl over land and can walk up and down walls and ceilings creeps me more than I can adequately describe.
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