Sgt.Pepper

I agree with SlickJimmy, it's a bit confusing. I think playing with the line breaks and experimenting with this could make it a better poem. not all the lines have ...

I hate how you talk like a computer in your posts that aren't poetry. Like, relax. I think you lose rhythm in the third stanza, look out.

To the first person, I think that you're taking the poem too seriously. To the second person, thanks for the reply, it was inpsired by this person that I know, ...

The world must be different, for those who can do the splits. Spread their legs around the world. In Tokyo, I see a foot. In Canada, I see an eye. ...

It was really good. I liked the words in the brackets, they flowed nicely. the only thing that, seemed kind-of-not-up-to-par was 'playing old records', it seemed kind of cliched. Although, ...

I like the random brief injection of numbers, it worked pretty well. And the rhyming at the end, worked pretty well.

Snoik, i like how technical you explained my poem. But i'm from BC, and man it totally wasn't as exact like that. Ieatworms, i'm almost glad you didn't understand, as ...

I'd say Ramones because i've heard more. And i love their dumb rock style. But what i have heard of the Clash, they sound much more skilled musicians. and they're ...

I don't know... The rhyming seems sloppily done. At first, you try, but then the rhyming gets increasingly more chaotic as the poem goes on. Plus, the metering seems way ...

Pillowcase Dog i went to your house last night and i met your dog i was lying on top of him, for quiet time until he fell out of his ...

Simple Plan Coldplay Oasis

All there songs to rock my socks Nowhere Man Eleanor Rigby Across The Universe Slow Down Misery Getting Better The list COULD go on forever.

^is a 14 year old boy with a knight as an avatar.

I saw here standing there, in my pants.

Not a fan or Gwen solo, but her No Doubt stuff is pretty cool, so: Franzy Danzy vs. Bif Naked.