Sgt.Pepper

hey hey, When your writting a POEM never use the word 'cause always use because its more poetry then.

Thinking empty thoughts drowning in my dreams I try to write a piece of something that's happened I'm blowing on a straw But nothing comes up Ain't it tough I ...

I can't belive this was 1920's doesnt even sound like it??? Anyway really cool song.

Yes I also liked the last verse alot. The first one could use some working on and so could the grammar. But you sum it all up very good.

Hey, this is my first poem posted please tell me what you think The untouched water hitting the shore brand new rain drops knocking on my door No leaves fallen ...

hey this is one of the two poems ive read on this site. It's really good. Keep Writing.

Hey Ya this poem is very cool. I loved the first line good stuff!