Sgt.Pepper

it doesnt matter at all, really if the first stanza is shorter, i think it's pretty good intro and it keeps the reader interested for the rest of the poem.

Cold Turkey - John Lennon Lennon and the beatles are the best ever. I just finished listening to In Bloom - Nirvana.

The best book i've probably every read is "Misery" By Stephen King. But I haven't read alot. The lord of the rings books where way better than the movies.

I think this poem was really good, except some of the repetion really brought it down, there was alot of it. But other than that it was pretty well done. ...

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Hey, really good job with this poem, it works really well. All the one liners sounded good. But in the second last line I dont think you need the work ...

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Yay, I walked proudley down the empty dark alleyway I didn't come last I came third...last But there was something missing So I bought something for my victory Sunchips and ...

thank you for your replies. Maybe i didnt explain enough but the "pizza" line isnt sussoped to be a parody, it means my "food has no taste" which means "nothings ...

It works great. I had a lot of fun reading this poem. I don’t think that this place is natural I think you COULD turn it into "I dont think ...

yes, you already know me (as Black Dog) but this poem again was utterly amazing. You are one very great writer![/i]

Ok, giving them a one line reply telling them that you hate it, isn't going to help. Why dont you show her which lines where cheezy and what to do ...

I totally understood this. And it was totally great. I feel cold underneath my creamy blue jumper. My arms are colder than that time you touched me with your frozen ...

do u have any good reason to hate Bush??? Do u understand anything? About why he went to war? I DIDNT THINK SO! so stop pretending you know wat ur ...

Actually this shouldnt be in randomness, if you had any brains you would understand this. If half the song wasnt already writtin this could be great. Dont let people like ...