ShadowLily

A morbid scent that drifts through the air Like an ominous reprise The smell of burning skin, Spreading through the dark grey skies First line, love it. The word "morbid" ...

I think this is really good! It lurches, it churns In the fire of my heart it burns, The creature is alive And from within my thoughts it cries. First ...

I love this, it's so pretty. The poem/song/whatever is so . . . heartfelt. I can feel your pain, not only from the fact that I know how you feel, ...

This is amazing. It really pulls the reader in. I had to read more when I read "She tried hard to remember her real name, but she couldn’t. She had ...

I love this! The first stanza was great; very descriptive, loved your word choice. You second stanza was also awesome, I swear it sent chills down my back. I just ...