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Re: Gods Of Fate- Prologue
This won't be much of a critism, as you appear to be much more talented at writing than I, but I would like you to know I think this is ...
Dec 14, 2009 -
Re: Aradel's Daughter Preface
Okay, so this is, overall, quite good. You have the base but you need to work on sentence structure. When you describe her hair, you might want to use something ...
Dec 14, 2009