Shady

TWO PEOPLE GOT HERE BEFORE ME?!?!?! That's so not ok! Ahahaha

Ah ok I get it. Although I did have to reread this like four times because I thought he was calling her Ani and it was some kind of weird ...

Ahh!! I was so happy to log into these reviews ^-^ However, I'm curious why if Derik thinks she's just being melodramatic and it's not actually that horrific... why don't ...

Okay, I just love this reptile background. I didn't know any of that! I'd be curious to hear about where she found all the snakes and iguanas and all that-- ...

Awwww, that's super sweet, thank you

Although . . . I was a bit surprised you didn't use any similes in this because when I reviewed one of your other chapters, you seemed a little eccentric ...

Ahaha I get it, NaNo was ROUGH. I am currently editing up chapters to post that I wrote during NaNo and am like whewwww buddy did we have a problem ...

I definitely wanted it to do what you described, which was to break the flow really obviously. I also wanted it to represent the x symbol that gets used to ...

Oooh that's good to know! I feel like this might be a bit of a filler stanza, now that I'm looking back on it. Do you think it would work ...

Oh hecc that response formatting is obnoxious, sorry ;-;

Typically, in third-person stories, it helps to start off with the name of the character that we're getting the perspective from. Fair enough! I'll edit c: This made me think-- ...

Aye! Thanks for the quick review :D So that is teleportation. That's a really cool way to write it! Yii! It's teleportation. And thanks c: I like her bitterness over ...

I am LAUGHING SO MUCH AT THIS DESCRIPTION AND I LOVE IT... stoic idiotic hero dude... yes... that is HIM ... THANNK U hahaha in this edition of reviews with ...

OMG I thought I fixed the frog/toad mess-up LOOOOOL I WILL FIX IT FOR YOU PLS DON'T SMITE ME hahahaha I literally cackled. *slowly sheathes smiting sword*

REVIEW! This is absolutely beautiful Shady! Excellent xD Beautiful turned Jerica real quick xDD I don't quite follow this, what would the Nykerians have had to do with an attack ...