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Re: Dance in the Rain
I love it.
Jun 10, 2012 -
Re: a visit to yesterday
I like the structure and rhythm of the poem. Great job, keep writing!
Mar 27, 2012 -
Re: Death, Joy, Leaves
Great poems! The only thing that I would change is the last two lines of "Joy." 'With joy and a happiness, Laugh and sing happily." The 'happiness' and 'happily' don't ...
Mar 26, 2012 -
Re: "I've Seen a Little Fairy"
The rhythm of the poem is a little off, but the structure is still great. Nice job!
Mar 26, 2012 -
Re: Childhood Memories
Wow, great poem! Thanks for the great read!
Mar 26, 2012 -
Re: Despair
Wow, this is very well-written poem! I'm impressed! great job =)
Mar 26, 2012 -
Re: Temptation
This poem is great! It has a lot of truth, and it is written very well. nice job, keep writing! =)
Mar 26, 2012 -
Re: A Mile In Your Shoes
I really like this poem, it has a lot of character. Great job!
Mar 26, 2012