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  • Welcome Mat Re: Hey there!

    haha i'd stand by Harry Potter..when I was younger I was like obsessed with the series. I analyzed every book and read them all over and over again lol I ...

    Apr 8, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: God's Grace

    I enjoyed this! I read it through about three times and it's a very smooth and easy read. The timing is good as is the rhythm. I t is your ...

    Apr 7, 2009
  • Writing Tips Re: Just need a little help with a Simile...

    How about something like, "...gnawed at me like a parasite." Simple and clear!

    Apr 7, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hello there!

    Hey Ariana! I'm a newbie like you...this is my second day, but I'm already liking this place more than any other writing site I've visited. Everyone seems really friendly and ...

    Apr 7, 2009
  • Lyrics Re: My Little girl.

    I really like this! But some things I am confused about: In the beginning of the song you used the words "her" and "she", and then all of a sudden ...

    Apr 7, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Stand by me

    Hey White! I liked the poem, it felt like a song and the rhythm was pretty good although it felt a little off in a few places. It feels like ...

    Apr 7, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hey there!

    Thanks everyone for responding, you're making me feel very welcomed! :D What's your favorite genre to write? I love writing fiction short stories and novels. Romance and historical fictions are ...

    Apr 7, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hey there!

    Hey everything, I just signed up to this site today. Usually I don't get into places like this, but YWS seems like a cool place. I love writing as well ...

    Apr 6, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Messenger

    I got the inspiration for this poem a few weeks ago and finally got to write it down. It turned out a bit different than I originated but I like ...

    Apr 5, 2009


It had a perfectly round door like a porthole, painted green, with a shiny yellow brass knob in the exact middle. The door opened on to a tube-shaped hall like a tunnel: a very comfortable tunnel without smoke, with panelled walls, and floors tiled and carpeted, provided with polished chairs, and lots and lots of pegs for hats and coats—the hobbit was fond of visitors. The tunnel wound on and on, going fairly but not quite straight into the side of the hill —The Hill, as all the people for many miles round called it—and many little round doors opened out of it, first on one side and then on another.
— JRR Tolkien