Sharon1407

The #pride has brought me here. I read the poem and checked to see if there were anyone who interpreted the poem like I did and saw there were none ...

Thanks.

Thanks.

This is definitely a lot better. Still a few suggestions- 1. Instead of "had I" you can say "I had". Keeping the sentence as it is is allowed in poetry, ...

Thank you for the review. :)

I really can't demean this beautiful work by reviewing it. Even if I would have read it with the intention of writing a review, I sure would have ran out ...

Thank you. And you weren't blabbering. :)

Well, it is about unrequited love and the poem is kind of on a personal note. Anyway, thanks for the review. :)

Thanks a lot for explaining that breaking-it-into-paragraphs part.

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Thank you and could you please suggest a few ideas for the title??:)

Wow! I think that is the best review I have got in ages... Thank you sooooo much....

It did help and I'll be sure to edit it as soon as possible. :)

No need to be sorry.. poetry is poetry at the end of the day... :)

Thanks for the suggestions... :)