Shearwater

Hey, WP :) Pink here! So, I think is a wonderful, gripping, amazing poem. Your imagery, your rhyming and everything was great and I really don't have anything that I ...

Hey Puppets, back for another review. ^^ Before me a blonde girl floats unconsciously, acting as a prisoner in the block of ice. Her face looked troubled; her anxious expression ...

Yo, Angel. ^^ Pink here to review! The darkest moments in our lives help us become the strongest person we know we can be. I like this but I think ...

Hiya! Sorry I'm getting to these so late. >.< Anyway, without further ado... I'm not going to do a through nitpicky review because well, many people have already established that ...

Hey, Puppets! Here to review ^^ So, you already have many, many nice reviews here so I won't bother going into much detail, I apologize. But I will still give ...

Hey, Addawen! Here to review ^^ As promised! Sorry for being a tad late, I didn't forget or anything. I just finished all the reviews I owed so I'm finally ...

Hey Lauren! Here to review :3 Nitpicks/comments Droplets of sun fell between softly rustling leaves, dancing over a young woman’s upturned face. She breathed heavily, pulling the sweet forest air ...

Heya Sprite! Thanks for the request ^^ So, you're trying to decide whether or not you should make a novel out of this, correct? Hmmm... After reading this, I'm not ...

Hey! Sorry for my lateness @___@ But, I'm here and I'm going to review this novel. Now, I might not comment on every chapter, just ones that I think you ...

Hey, Shubhi and Lily! ^^ Nitpicks/comments The flashlights, the disco ball, and the worst of all-his hands rolled around her waist. I would reword this: The flashing lights, the disco ...

Kendra! I'm here to review, as promised ^^ Nitpicks Unless it was Facebook or Microsoft then he wasn’t all that successful because I’d never heard of him. Hah XD The ...

Hi, Ointe! The Mist clings to the mountains like a young child not wanting its mother to leave, The Mist floats over the ocean like a drifting cloud, full of ...

Hey Flower! So, unfortunately, I'm probably the worst poet on the site, therefore my review is as good as hot fudge on a summer day. Yup. Might do you more ...

Hi Meg! Thanks again for the request ^^ Alright, this is going to be quite a short review, I apologize but I found myself unable to really find anything that ...

o.o Check out all the wolf avvies lol Anyways, thanks for telling me about this! I'm glad to hear that I encouraged you to expand this into a novel. I ...