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  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Chatper 1: Junior Year

    Hi! Pink here, for a review! Isaiah was an annoyance to me. For some reason he'd been in my English class Sophomore year and now, my Junior year, I imagined ...

    Sep 26, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Poem That Got Me a Date to Homecoming

    Hi! Pink here :) So I've read this before and I think it was sweet and short. I mean, I wish a guy wrote me a poem haha. I think ...

    Sep 26, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Better To Have Loved And Lost?

    Hey Light, Pink here! So I've read your piece and I think I love it. I mean, the bitterness to it was astounding and you kept your voice clean and ...

    Sep 26, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Lie of a Normal Life

    Hi Quill, Pink here :) So, I actually liked this piece, it was nicely written and I did enjoy how you connected everything through the little lie that she been ...

    Sep 26, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Cross Your Heart (One-shot)

    Hey Wicked! Pink here, dropping by to do a short review. So, I think you had a good idea here. I mean there were minor mistakes but I won't point ...

    Sep 26, 2010
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Fire

    Hi Pink here! I'll be reviewing your work today :D Fires long to consume. They rage and ravage, burning whatever encounters their path, transforming it into ash and embers and ...

    Sep 26, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Love, The Boy Above...

    Hey Books! Here to review! Super speedy one though, hope you don't mind :) So I'm not going to nitpick since it's been done and I don't feel like doing ...

    Sep 26, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Definition of Love

    Alrighty, Jalmoc :D Nitpicks It seemed like a normal day in Plymouth, IN. I would use the whole name of the state instead of just the initials. “Bubby, time to ...

    Sep 26, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Murder Can Write 2/2 (a two-part story)

    Hey! Pink here, again :) Nitpicks Its shrill and raspy voice had snapped me out of my petrified state. I think it should be "it's" A human being in miniature, ...

    Sep 26, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Murder Can Write 1/2 (a two-part story)

    Hola! Pink here :) So I'll be reviewing this, hope you don't mind. Nitpicks TUESDAY. 1:20PM. That particular Manila afternoon was killing me. The rainy season was supposed to have ...

    Sep 26, 2010
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Aren: Guardian Angel

    Hi baywolf! So first of all I want to compliment you on the turn of the word 'angel' here. Describing them as aliens was quite funny and I liked the ...

    Sep 26, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: [Cool title goes here]

    Hi Kel, Pink here! Review sunday means review, review so that's what I'm here to do. ;) You said criticism...so... Nitpicks "Oh come on Will" said Jack as they marched ...

    Sep 26, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: A Shot of Arrogance (Chapter Nine)

    Since it's review Sunday, I might as well go all out, eh? So, here we go! Youv'e just got to do what's right, okay? I say we burn typos alive. ...

    Sep 26, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: A Shot of Arrogance (Chapter Eight ~ Part Two)

    Hey Skins! Pink here! “These ones are mingin’ though,” he shrugged. “yours are way nicer.” You're missing a capitalization here. 'Yours are way nicer." “For being a complete knob and ...

    Sep 26, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Alone into the Night

    Hi Wicked! Pink here :) Here to do a quick review for this short piece, hope you don't mind ;) My fiancée, James, always refused to come to the bar ...

    Sep 26, 2010


I always knew that deep down in every human heart, there is mercy and generosity. No one is born hating another person because of the color of his skin, or his background, or his religion. People must learn to hate, and if they can learn to hate, they can be taught to love, for love comes more naturally to the human heart than its opposite.
— Nelson Mandela, Long Walk to Freedom