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Sherbet

  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Flood

    Brian, I understand what you are saying about using more creative language but I purposly didnt. This poem is a reflection of what Im feeling and as my head is ...

    Mar 20, 2006
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Dream

    Thanks for that. Is my age showing up wrong, or did you misread it? Because I'm actually 16... Still extremly novice though!

    Jan 22, 2006
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: My Road

    Thanks! I'll look into that.

    Nov 13, 2005
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: wedding poem

    That was really beautiful! It seemed to capture just the right things... If that makes any sense

    Oct 30, 2005
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Norwegian Drive-By *comment please*

    Wow, that's really good. I like it

    Oct 30, 2005


The grand in the hotel rings with broken tunes; the guests frown; the concierge winces. But the blue-hatted boy is happy and braver than they.
— TheMythMaster