Shireling

And if you all don't know, the last part of the Ink Trilogy is going to be InkDeath. :) Happy reading! Thanks for the tip Monki, I actually found that ...

Li Dies???? Arrrghh! I liked that little guy. I still can't figure out Bird yet either and it's bugging me, he's weird , definitely not like any villain I've read ...

Chapter 3 In a darkened basement room, a row of computer monitors lit up a cluttered desk with dim blue glow. Fifteen-year old Max Dexter hunched over the desk gripping ...

More Chair in the making? Yesss! I've been needing another Shan fix for awhile. The changes you made in the first chapter are good, although I still think that 'pednulum' ...

Chapter Two Two men guarding the gate, three watchtowers, a few tents, a rundown house, a jeep, and a truck armed and armored with a heavy caliber machine gun and ...

I agree with Gyr, Lester Bird is fine so far, just make sure that he doesn't drift into the whole 'I am an evil bad guy and I like it' ...

Thanks for the review mikeyr, I'll take your suggestions into consideration. I decided to repost this in the Sci-Fi so I'll be adding to it there. Thanks again.

Thanks Adam for the review. As to why Dirk is unhappy working with a robot it's partly both reasons you mentioned, I might have to elaborate on that some more. ...

I found some time, so here is my review. First of all I want to say that I have really enjoyed your story. You are great at creating characters and ...

Now I am a little more awake, so I am going to jump right in. “Thing?!” roared the skeleton, arms coming up to twist his head around to stare at ...

Shireling - Hmm... I seem to recall that the co author came up with over half the story ideas before I came in and rewrote and polished and finished. Quote: ...

I finally got around to giving you a review. Although I read, or rather skimmed, through all of your previous critiques, I may still point out what others have already ...

I agree, one can never read too much of Tolkien, although it is good to read something else for a change of pace. Hey Twit cool story, I'll try to ...