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That's very impressive. I like this portion the best: White lights glaring, An angel sings, Looks so caring, A loud noise rings, Flames and fire, Trapped in hell, Feelings so ...

I like this. It's very sweet. I also like the way that you use colors to describe her vivid dreams. I just have two suggestions. I would add some more ...

I love this, it's simple and to the point, which goes along with the image of a simple mask very well. You perfectly married that image and this poem together. ...

That was interesting to say the least. I respect how you test the restraints of poetry to form a piece like this, kudos for that. I usually don't like poems ...

I love this poem, especially the second stanza. The imagery in that stanza and the first are amazing. I would just suggest combining the last two stanza's in some way, ...

Hi. I really like your poem. I just have two small suggestions, you use the words eerie, fog, and oblivion a lot in them. I try to refrain from doing ...