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Hey, Bookworm! This is Shooting Stars like you requested! I'm sorry to say this, but this review will have to be short because I haven to leave soon! Sorry! 1. ...

Hi! This Shooting Stars as you have requested! The beginning feels very repetitive. I know that this is probably what you are going for, but it gets slightly old. However, ...

Hey! This is Shooting Stars as requested! Sorry for the wait! :-D I think that this was a very interesting piece and it drew me in with the first few ...

You CAN start a sentence with the word "but", as long as it's a complete thought. Your second grade ELA teachers told you that because they didn't want to confuse ...

Hey, there! This is Shooting Stars as requested. You told me to critique you on how interesting this piece is, and I have to say that I wanted to keep ...

This is Shooting Stars, your quick critique! -Firstly, the paragraphs seem bunched together so it makes your piece hard for the reader to read. -Everything seems to move too fast. ...

Hi, Mayhem! This Shooting Stars for a quick review! I have to say that I'm a fan of this type of book. :-D Anyways, I really like what you have ...

Hey there! Shooting Stars is here for her reviewing session!!! I have to say that this is a very powerful poem, and it keeps you thinking long after the last ...

Hi, there! Shooting Stars is here for a review! First of all, I think that the beginning caught my attention with the way you set it up. I wanted to ...

Hey, UpandOut! Sorry for being late! Quick review: 1.I just want to say that this is a very important topic, and you handled it well. It has a powerful message. ...

Hello! This is Shooting Stars as requested! (finally) Sorry for taking soooooo long! First of all, I wanted to say that the descriptions were marvelous. They created an image in ...

Hi! This is Shooting Stars coming to review your poem! And here I am. One word: WHOA. This was a very powerful piece of work that kept you thinking long ...

Hi, Dogs! This Shooting Stars, your reviewer today. First I must say I really liked this poem! The concept was great and I can tell you put a lot of ...

Hi! This is Shooting Stars here to review... Well, there's actually not very much here for me to review. Is this a part of another short story or chapter? Alone, ...

Hi! This is Shooting Stars here to review... Well, there's actually not very much here for me to review. Is this a part of another short story or chapter? Alone, ...