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Re: You Are Drowning
And months have gone by and i finally get around to reviewing this. He, uh? Sorry? I can't help that I'm lazy. anyway I have a few edits. It is ...
Aug 4, 2006 -
Re: Falling
I liked your poem it had nice meter, and rhymed, but I think the lines "Pheonix feather, Sprightly elf" are kind of off topic. Maybe you should explain that more? ...
Jan 27, 2006