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Shyblueishflower

  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Deleted

    This is a really good story so far. The only things I noticed were a few grammar and punctuation mistakes. But, other than that, everything was good. Please keep writing, ...

    Apr 20, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: A Trip to Wonderland

    Hello here are just a few things that I noticed: A Piece of chocolate cake ♦That makes me shrink and small - Ok to shrink means to get smaller ♠And ...

    Apr 1, 2011


The greatest part of a writer’s time is spent in reading, in order to write; a man will turn over half a library to make one book.
— Samuel Johnson