Siddharth

Hey Blue, A very beautifully written poem that describes in such a lucid way in which the writer misses the songs of the birds in winter. You have given a ...

You are a very talented poem and have a way with words that I wish I could even slightly match. I also absolutely love your word choice using words like ...

Oh and what's this mean 'forgotten end to end' that seems like a forced attempt at rhyming. It makes no logical sense. It's probably where this falls down, the rhyming, ...

cannot see the meaning in this either. To be honest with you I didn't like it, I felt it was just there and I think you concerntrated more on putting ...

Hey! I think this poem is very interesting and I like the concept a lot. It flows quite well and the rhyming is good, if a little predictable in places. ...

Hey, this is really really well written! Well done. You have a similar writing style to me; tending to use a larger vocabulary. And I've received so many requests to ...

Corrections ~ “What are those?” I asked pointing forward; Rick held his hand up as one of the puffballs slowed down and laid right in his hand. C: "What are ...

Wow, I loved that, and I am not really a huge fan of poems, I mean they are ok but this was more than just ok, I looked back on ...

I really really love your style with this. The flow, rhyming, wording are in a word: fantastic. I can hear you saying this from deep inside, like writing your innermost ...

It's beautifully written, carry on .I did see a couple of typos, but nothing that hindered your message. A few words here and there might be tweaked, but overall it's ...

Hello! Sid here for a review! Also, welcome to YWS! I hope your time here will be enjoyable, and I'm also glad that I get to be your first review! ...

Wonderful poem!! The thing about this poem that I would like to see adjusted most would be its structure. You could split up some of your longer lines to make ...

Wow, that is some good expression. Personally I like the way you used less words, but still be able to convey the emotion. {cons} there's no punctuation, and it's a ...

I'll start with what I liked about this. The first paragraph really caught my attention and I was immediately interested in what the "Darkness" was. The words you used to ...

Okay, this is a interesting paragraph, and I have a few complaints. For one, it appears you have inconsistent periods, in poetry unless you are doing a certain style, you ...