Sierra

Oooh, this was wonderful!! I definitely want to read more. The entire thing was absolutely wonderful. I have no nitpicks what so ever. Sparkles, Sierra

Tick, tick, tick. The frail old man stares, waiting, at the clock. The hand moves slowly, taunting him I love this sentence. . It is saying, “Time is against you, ...

Wow. This was just . . . wow. It was wonderful. I loved the emotion and the description. I agree with theotherone, that the last sentence was a kind of ...

Hi!! I just love the idea behind this!!! I Am the Girl of the Moon I lie back on my crescent hammock As it drifts on through the sky, Swung ...

Oooh, this was really good. Very dramatic. I loved the raw emotion. Remember to capitalize the first letter of every sentence, not just the first letter of every stanza. Sierra

[flash=][/flash] Just wondering, what is this supposed to be? I would really prefer friends not to tell secrets that are personal and important , but , having friends who love ...

Behold, my first short story from after NaNoWriMo!!! I'm a bit rusty, so please do not rip this to tiny little pieces. Medium pieces are good. So are large pieces. ...

Oooh, I really liked this! Very bitter and dramatic. I do have a few critiques. The slip of your tonge It's spelled 'tongue', and I think you should add some ...

Wow. Just wow. This was awesome. You nailed the emotions very well. Keep writing :)

I think Hunger, by Michael Grant, was pretty disturbing. In a subtle way.

Wow. This is amazing!! I love the emotion and your writing style is wonderful.

Awesome, Nixy!! Me thinks i know what the inspiration for this is :) I love the part 'I am banished to this boulevard, the Boulevard of Broken Dreams' !!! I ...

This is just a little something i came up with at a carnival today :smt003 Enjoy! :smt002 “Are you sure you want to go on?” I asked her anxiously as ...

This is the first chapter of a novel i'm currently working on. This is the total first draft, so it's pretty rough, and i don't know how much sense it ...

Hello, my name is Chance, and i'm trying not to kill you right now. Hello, my name is Lila, and i'm your worst nightmare.