SilentOllie

What happens, when you care, but you're afraid to? What happens when all you thought you knew, was just a dream? A dream of hopeful wishes, scattered across your heart? ...

The emotion behind this poem was true, and I felt the hurt that you yourself was feeling. The poem itself was good, the format and flow of rhythm wasn't the ...

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I leapt through the Autumn leaves Bridging the chasm of empty air. Series of gold and red fall softly as I leap. I reach out to grab the branches, Hoping ...

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I lay beneath the sky, next to the earth The sun is high in the sky, And the bright light reaches my face, My eyes are closed, and I feel ...

I wish that you knew how much I missed you, How I wish I could turn back time to when we were in the raquet ball room, I wish that ...

I liked this poem, I know that the words and feeling put into it can relate to many other people's lives today. Like others who commented before me, yes the ...

Like the others before me who commented on your poem, I found it quick, and straight to the point. The beginning was sweet, yet predictable the questions that someone may ...

Blue. Blue veins, I trace them lightly with my finger and watch them glow underneath my skin. They’re so beautiful; I sit there enchanted and stare at their splendor. “Why ...

Wow! This poem was told with a lot of heart, and it flowed so nicely that it was a pleasure to read. When you mentioned "Georgia", I've never been there- ...

Stranger in My Eyes was a sweet and sad poem. And it told a story that's similiar to many other peoples' out there. I like how you posed this person ...

Well first off, I'd like to say that this poem really spoke what I felt inside about someone. Your word choice was well picked, and it was lengthy. However, you ...

While I was at school, I silently prayed that my mind would be spared another painful migraine, and life would continue as normal as possible. Walking out in the courtyard ...

The silence fills my soul, I've never felt so free. I am floating upward over the troubles, My wings are spreading, I'm flying, Soaring. But I am still held to ...