SilentRain

Hello!! Rain here!! So, I really liked this poem, it is well written and the structure is good. It flows quite nicely and the theme is a good one. So, ...

Hello!! Rain here!! So my main criteque on this is that it is not structured like a poem. Just because it is a naritive poem doesn't mean that it needs ...

Hello!! Rain here!! So, I liked this poem, I liked the idea of it, and the way you brought it across was good. But it lacked flow. A lot of ...

Hello!! Rain here! So, first I'd like to say thanks for requesting a review! I don't get many requests lately. So, on to the poem. Red- Grammer mistakes Blue- Things ...

Hello! Nice poem, very real. Not much to say, other then a few suggestion: Blue: Things I think would help the poem, baced on my opinion. Red: Error in grammar/puncuation. ...

Hello Rain here! So, I liked this poem, the rhyming messed me up a bit, if you could have a set rhyme scheme, it would work really good. Red- Grammer ...

Hello, Rain here. I liked this, it was short and simple, the main problem I found was that it has no set structure. I think if you have a set ...

Wow, it may not make complete sence, but, I like that you did this to try to get rid of writers block. It is a realyy good idea acculy. I ...

Hello there! I liked this, it was sweet and simple. At first i wasn't all into the repatision, but by the end it just fit. A place like this would ...

Hello!! Nice poem! One think to say though, in the second stanza, your first two lines don't rhyme. Otherwise this was a great poem, the flow did get alittle rock ...

Hello LoveBug! Ok, just because I'm your sister doesn't mean I'm going to go easy on you... So... Here you go: I think it was ok, could use some work, ...

Well, I just want to say that I found this simply beautiful... I just loved it... The only thing I have to say is that the "wild" in the last ...

Hello, I'm really sorry I didn't get this done until now... So, mainly the only think I find really wrong with this is that it really needs more imagry or ...

Hello, so, first off, you need to capitolize "Remember When" In your title... So, here are my nit-picks... I wont piont out the caps errors, someone already has... I wont ...

Hello, Rain here, it makes sence. Ok, so, the main thing I think should be done to this poem to make it better it to add metaphors or similies, to ...