SilverQuill

This is such a fun poem! The rhythm could use a bit of work, as could the rhyme scheme, but I love it. The way it skips around so much ...

I very much like the subject matter. It's easy to relate to, which is good. The rhythm, however, doesn't flow very well. Other than that, it's really good. Great job.

While I do like the simplicity of this poem, it does need more detail, a bit more fleshing out. The random capitalization and lack of punctuation doesn't quite add to ...