SilverSharpie

I really liked this. I could feel how Mel felt the whole and I was amazed at your description of the school systems. I liked how you used capitalization in ...

Hey, nice work! This feels... incomplete though. I feel like you need more grief- your main characters lost her parents and sister and everyone and now all she can really ...

Wow. That was intense. I really liked your work and it had a very authentic sort of feeling- I could tell you really cared about Chester and Iggy. All I ...

I really like your poem with the repetition of "I'm sorry" at the end of every stanza- it had a really raw, emotional feeling to it. I would break up ...

I loved this poem. I shall start with the first thing I loved... - I though in the first stanza... "moths to a light really?" but then I saw how ...

My review is going to be so lame after canislupis's but here goes... THAT WAS AWESOME! Really, I liked it a lot. I mean, the beginning was a little awkward ...

Wow. I don't really read much poetry but I happened across this and I read and I am glad I did. This is really, absolutely, and utterly fantastic. I'm sorry ...

That was like reading something professional! I guess I probably should have read the first chapter first but all in good time. All I would add is to describe Isabelle's ...

This has huge potential! I feel like with some lengthening you will have a great opening to an engaging book. Add some more details about Luna, her family, the Scouts, ...

I think is really adorable and rhythmical. The whole time I was reading it I could just feel the way everything flowed. After reading all the other posts on this ...

That was really... chilling. But in an amazingly well written way- I want to see more of your work because that was really excellent! One thing though, how would you ...

Wow. That was excellent- I can't wait for another chapter! I really heard the distinctive voice of Olivia and I could literally feel her emotions. The only thing i would ...

I thought this was excellent and I guess whatever I say has sort of been said already. All I can say with out being redundant is I feel like this ...