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Re: The Heiur Blade (Part 6&7)
Overall, I like it. There are a few things I see that could be changed though. Throughout the story (mostly in the beginning) you use the word 'plunge' and 'plunged' ...
Feb 24, 2011
Overall, I like it. There are a few things I see that could be changed though. Throughout the story (mostly in the beginning) you use the word 'plunge' and 'plunged' ...
Feb 24, 2011
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