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SimplyLayal

  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: A Change in my Heart

    I really liked the positive vibes coming from that poem! here "It’s all thanks to that one person, Who I love and cherish most." it should be "Whom i love ...

    Jan 2, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Prologue: A Puzzling Victim

    i really did love this! I love your style in writing, it flowed perfectly throughout the passage. It's definitely different and unique. I loved how it ended and i would ...

    Jan 2, 2014


I wondered why we put villains in our stories when we have plenty of them in real life; then I realized that maybe we wanted stories where the good guy wins.
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