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Re: Darkest Trilogy: Asleep & Awaken Chapter 1.
Both of your guys review helped loads. I'm going to touch it up tonight. Sunny, I keep forgetting for some reason to put the main characters name in :P. I've ...
May 3, 2009 -
Re: TDotDLT
Okay, here is the rest of the review! :) From the stairwell, it was just a short walk to Thirilight's room, for which Morgen was grateful. Unfortunately, when Morgen tried ...
Mar 28, 2009 -
Re: The Marble Horse: Chapter One
Thanks everyone for all there reviews! I would like to note that I wrote this chapter on a stray piece of paper, a napkin, my mom's cellphone and a really ...
Feb 15, 2009 -
Re: Not Again!
I usually don't comment on my reviews but I have to point out one thing. Not all poems have to rhythm. This was just a suppose to be a funny ...
Jan 22, 2009 -
Re: Marcus And His Mysterious Travels: The Window Escape
Wow, I have never gotten such a long review before! Thank you! I realize there are a lot of errors-- this is after all the first draft-- and you helped ...
Dec 19, 2008 -
Re: Marcus And His Mysterious Travels: The Window Escape
come on! review!
Oct 21, 2008 -
Re: Gone Forever
Thank you for your comment Writ3! I was having a problem trying to find something to rhyme with care =P Though I was wondering, are you thinking of the word ...
Jun 15, 2008 -
Re: Gone Forever
Thank you very much for your comments. The jump in narrative was intentional but I might end up editing it and making it flow better. Thanks again for the comments! ...
Jun 15, 2008 -
Re: My Master, my Lover.
Wonderful! Intoxicating! I couldn't stop reading! There were a few grammar and spelling issues but other then that... GREAT JOB!!
Jun 8, 2008