Sins

Woop! Go Chrome! :elephant:

Hey again! Here for the last review. 8) “Don’t trip,” Tasha warns, sounding strangely serious for such a small request. Because I don't really like sentences that start with Because. ...

It's me again. :wink: You know the drill. I follow Tasha out the door and into the light, blinking a few times. The white walls remind me of the strange ...

Heya :) Here to review as requested! Red = Corrections/negatives Blue = Things I like Bold = My comments/suggestions Conscious thoughts swirl into my head and I pull my eyelids ...

10/10 I've always loved your Avatar... :xd: Ranger; Yeah, I understand. :wink:

I'm really liking this! I reckon we should try and make this the longest storyboook ever... :thud: Sue me, I dream big. :roll: As for your tribe question Indis; I'm ...

Yeah, fair enough. :wink:

Everyone posted over night. Blooming time zones.... :xd: Dougie Lee Yeah. Those guys were going to suffer without me. I didn't even know why I asked to go with them, ...

Hey Mystical :) I have to comment on this (obviously) tam_ara actually told me about it, you'll have to thank her! I'm no expert when it comes to art so ...

I use unjoined writing. Mainly because when I write with my writing joined up, it looks like a six year old has written it. Mind you, my unjoined writing isn't ...

Dougie Lee "Aw. Bwabies gotta gun. Ohh, I'm scawred." Mike laughed. "Dude... learn to speak properly..." I rolled my eyes at them. I was about to tell them about how ...

You get to laugh at an excitable English guy! :smt005 -inserts coin-

Banned for telling me to check out your Youtube again. :thud:

I've posted too! I wasn't too sure what to write though... :lol:

Dougie Lee I shut my eyes as I lay down on the soft, damp grass. I sighed heavily and listened to the chaos around me. There were teenagers shouting and ...