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Heya :) I'm here to review as requested. You've already gotten a review from me before so I'm sure you know the drill. I'll start off with the nit-picks, then ...

Heya :) Here to review as requested. I'm pretty sure that I haven't reviewed anything of yours before, so I'll just tell you quickly about how I reviews. 'Cause I'm ...

Heya Jane :) I'm here to review as requested. I'm not sure if I've ever reviewed anything of yours before, but yeah. Just to let you know, I'll start off ...

Uh... very interesting... :lol: Now, if you ask me, it's lyrics like this that are truly beautiful. You really have interpreted the beauty of a calculator in this. You actually ...

Heya Andy! (I call you Andy 'cause I'm cool, by the way) I've never reviewed anything of yours before, so I may as well start doing so now. You might ...

Heya ducky :) You don't have any comments or reviews on this yet, so here I am to give you some. I'm not sure if I've reviewed anything of yours ...

Heya :) I'll start this review off with the nit-picks, considering you don't have many at the moment. I'm not sure how many I'll find, or even if I'll find ...

Heya :) It's reviewing day... so I'm here to review! The lush forest surrounded me as I ran. My legs ached, my heart pumped, my lungs screamed. None of that ...

Heya Swanee :) You don't have any line by line nit-picks so far, so I thought I'd give you some. Staring with resignation at the daunting task before him , ...

Heya Day :) I'm here to review the first chapter of this. I need to review more, so yeah... here I am. You've already gotten quite a few nice reviews ...

Hey! I'm here to review, believe it or not. :wink: Sitting in my green velvet chair , I absorbed the cottage that surrounded me. Fresh mountain air rolled in from ...

Heya :) You only have one review so I thought I'd drop by and give you another one. You haven't got any nit-picks so far so I'll start off with ...

Heya Galerius :) You've already gotten some epic critiques, especially from Evi and Kamas, so I'm probably not going to have much to say about this. I don't want to ...

Hyea F1shes. :) Here to review as requested! You don't have any nit-pick critiques yet, so I'll start off with them. You said that you don't have a title? Remember, ...

Ack, I didn't realize how much earlier this was written! For some reason, I missed it when it first came up on YWS. In any case, thanks for donating this ...