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evil smile wicked grin your long hair brushes with my chin I take your arm from the bin it falls off, O what a sin! We get ready in our ...

I have mixed greek myths up so don't worry. I have always known my father's death like I have always known the grass is green and the sky is blue. ...

Kaywiia, This poem makes me miss summer. I love the repetition though I think it needs more similes. Peace!

Thanks for all the comments!

I love the moral! I give you three-four stars!

Dear peeps, Thanks for your comments! Also, how did you guys get those pictures?

I loved it!!! Great imaginative writing, suspence, and characters. Where is the dad? Why does the mom hate Candice's problem? Maybe from personal history *hint*? Rock on and keep writing!

Coolio! Did she (she?) live or die? Where are they? What is the setting? Overall, I really liked it. Keep writing!

YO leeanna13097!!!! LOVE it!!!! Though why would the gaurds not have their weapons? They are very stupid! But keep on writing!

Wow!!! That's all I can say. It's really deep and emotional. I also get my best ideas late at night especially after a confusing day. I'll keep looking for your ...

Amazing, especially for the younger readers! A great poem too!!!! I love the rhyming though I write poems, I'm terrible w/ a capital T when trying to rhyme. Please look ...

Interesting and thought provoking how you look at red.

Dear FreeVoice, This would make an AMAZING children's story, especially in states that are near the ocean and have local whales like Maine. Besides the couple grammar errors, I loved ...

Interesting poem. I myself am a poet and love looking at different views of poetry. Your really caught my attention.

Coolio!!! Being a fan and proud owner of three cats I found this most interesting. I especially liked how you put the cat's thoughts. I can't wait to see how ...