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Re: The Infection: New World (Chapter 2-3)
Sorry that I haven’t posted a chapter in a long time. If you do a review, please try to find any spelling/grammar mistakes. I had little time to write this ...
Feb 26, 2018 -
Re: Ten 6-word short stories
Here’s some. “He can’t hide. I smell fear.” ———— “Welcome to McDonald’s.” “I’ll take fries.” ———— “Why did you kill him?!?” “Justice.” ———— Jim’s
Feb 13, 2018 -
Re: What We Want Prolouge
Errors: "Elena can you describe yourself in one word?" should have a comma after the word Elena. When you say "I don't know for certain but it would have changed." ...
Feb 9, 2018 -
Re: The Infection: New World (Chapter 1)
I'm sorry if you think it was too quick paced but that was kind of the whole point. I kind of have two different types of characters planned out for ...
Feb 3, 2018 -
Re: The Infection: New World
If anyone has 75 points to spare, that would be great. I have 125 points and a new chapter ready to go, but I can't post anything because I don't ...
Jan 30, 2018 - Re: The Infection: New World (Chapter 1) Jan 30, 2018
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Re: The Infection: New World
I'm sorry you didn't understand much of it, but I purposely tried to make it in a way so readers wouldn't understand what is going on. As for your first ...
Jan 29, 2018 -
Re: The Infection: New World
Let me know if you have any requests for characters, this book won't have any main characters, it will alternate between characters: one character per chapter, with some characters having ...
Jan 27, 2018 -
Re: Lost
Good job. I like how you don't state what the character is, yet you give hints like: 'I had to run, and this new body was NOT built for that.', ...
Jan 27, 2018