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hey don't knock it -- i'd burn to death for one of my horses lol! thanks for the review glad you liked it. x

… ‘Guess you thought he’d killed me? Well so did I. But the stupid bloodsucking twit, had other ideas. He didn’t want me dead – but undead was okay. His ...

I think its awesome that you made him evil - he's just too goody goody in the book. And arn't all the stereotypical vampyres supposed to be evil? It was ...

aww that was sad. Is it based around world war two or somethind? its just when it says 'The soldier listens to a shout in a strange language ' it ...

heya everyone i only joined yesterday and am off school whith a migraine... =( poor me.. so ienjoy writing but im not good at it so if anyone would like ...

‘I felt the icy hand on my neck. Shivers ran through my whole body, my breathing came in quick ugly gasps. Tears were slowly escaping my eyes. I wanted to ...

This is going to sound stupid but it made me cry, it is a really moving piece of work, very good and unique - you should continue with it cos ...

Wow this is really amazing - I've always been into mythology and this is very very good - its different to alot of the other dragon stuff i've read and ...

This is really good - lol i envy you your talent x I agree with what your saying I feel the same all the time especially when I'm at school. ...

The fiery horse ran away from the terror behind him, without realising he found himself wedged between a stable and fence. He panicked as he valiantly tried to free himself ...

I was so tired. My lungs were stinging my chest - swelling to bursting point. My body was so hot I felt I would combust any minute. I had to ...