SkyeWriter7

Thanks to all commenters and you guys gave me much to think about. :D I shall try to develop this.

It's quite good. Some of the rhythm is a little off (Father look at me- you might want to place another 'father') but overall I loved it.

Colors; luminescent swirling. They dance before me, enthralling, in this dreamworld.

This is hilarious. I don't understand why people get so upset... I'm sure Miss "Quesadilla" Spalding is very talented. And I'm also sure her music is recognizable as music... as ...

I like it. It reminds me of 'Nobody' by Emily Dickinson... I assume that was what you were aiming for, right? I liked the rhythm and the last stanza.

Hi. I'm new (just joined a few moments ago) and excited. I'm also slightly confused but I imagine it will dissipate eventually. I'm so excited to be part of a ...

I loved it. It was original, descriptive, and peaceful. I had a great image in my mind of where you were and I liked the way you conveyed your thoughts. ...