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SkyeWriter7

  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Dream

    Thanks to all commenters and you guys gave me much to think about. :D I shall try to develop this.

    May 29, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: I'm Sorry, I Have Lost My Mind

    It's quite good. Some of the rhythm is a little off (Father look at me- you might want to place another 'father') but overall I loved it.

    May 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Something

    I like it. It reminds me of 'Nobody' by Emily Dickinson... I assume that was what you were aiming for, right? I liked the rhythm and the last stanza.

    May 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Grandparents House

    I loved it. It was original, descriptive, and peaceful. I had a great image in my mind of where you were and I liked the way you conveyed your thoughts. ...

    May 27, 2011


It had a perfectly round door like a porthole, painted green, with a shiny yellow brass knob in the exact middle. The door opened on to a tube-shaped hall like a tunnel: a very comfortable tunnel without smoke, with panelled walls, and floors tiled and carpeted, provided with polished chairs, and lots and lots of pegs for hats and coats—the hobbit was fond of visitors. The tunnel wound on and on, going fairly but not quite straight into the side of the hill —The Hill, as all the people for many miles round called it—and many little round doors opened out of it, first on one side and then on another.
— JRR Tolkien