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Re: Chapter One
I think I already critted all this on TW. Correct me if I'm wrong.
Sep 23, 2007 -
Re: The Otherworld Chronicles
Thanks for all the critiques, guys! As for the inquired part, I'm english so I use enquired.
Sep 20, 2007 -
Re: The Otherworld Chronicles
Oh, I'm very sorry.
Sep 16, 2007