Sleeplessend

After looking at the ending i see what you mean. The ending is supposed to signify that the friend is not real, its an imaginary friend and the child is ...

This is an awesome begining to a story you have here. Keep up the detail of the settings and the emotion of the character. Enjoyable read and good climax. Please ...

Awesome thank you very much for the review and tips! Ill be sure to work on it.