SleepyJackie

Thank you all very, very much for your reviews! (Especially baron.vrinda - PM me if you want any reviews from me :)) No harsh critiques? xD I'm not sure whether ...

Thank you! I get what you're saying. I'll try to use your advice in further writing. Thanks very much for reviewing & explaining (:

Thank you for all for reviewing. I understand the points you criticise. smorgishborg, could you give me an example of what is, in your eyes, a vivid image? That might ...