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"Stay here, Leik!" My mother whispered frantically. "No!" I forced out back to her. "Don't mom, don't!" She touched her hand to the nape of my neck assuringly and wiped ...

An interesting read. It has a lot of potential being so different from other stories I've read before. I think it may have moved a little too fast in the ...

First off, I just want to say that I disagree with some of the other posts in the sense that I do not think the chapter was too long or ...

This is definitely the kind of story that keeps me reading. It is the heart and soul of teen angst! Raw, and thoroughly relateable to real life. I think what ...

I like this one, wow. You have a ton of potential with the storyline. My only real critique, some parts became a little unclear to me during the end when ...

I really enjoyed being able to view the potential you have for character writing. Although there were many minor flaws to this little excerpt or chapter to this story you've ...

Hello :) My name's Shentel and I'm a only a very recent addition to the site. To say the least, I'm a little confused on how everything works. I've never ...