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  • Other » General, General Re: Letter to My Mother

    I'm sort of a fan of when writers decide to be brave enough to take a more personal approach to their writing. Often times it cleanses out their thoughts and ...

    Jul 14, 2011
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Time Tunnel

    So, I'm sad to say that because this is so short, I don't have as much to say as per my usual reviewing standards. D: Perhaps this was placed in ...

    Jul 5, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: A collection of senryu

    Karzkin, this is really quite brilliant. :lol: I loved it, and I'm not even all that caught up on the gist of the difference between Haiku and Senryu. I think ...

    Jul 5, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Your Brother...

    I saw the title and guessed right. ^-^ This was exactly an 'I'm in love with your brother' poem. I have to say, you picked a fresh subject to write ...

    Jul 4, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Nevermind them, Us.

    Well overall, I think this may have had its potential, but it's far too in the stages of a first draft for me to clearly make out any solid potential ...

    Jul 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Tend your Flame!

    Hey, Temi. Well I have to say, a lot of your lines were quite original. It makes it for interesting poetry. One thing I didn't so much like though was ...

    Jul 2, 2011
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Quantum Chronometric Tunneling and Purple Socks

    Ohhh. . . Now I get it. Thanks for the spoiler, Snoink. Now. Onto my impression of this scientifical little story you have here! I enjoyed how even though I ...

    Jun 30, 2011
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: The Boy in the Striped Pyjamas

    Hey, Rabbit! Wow, I must say it was your title that pulled me in. I've never read the book, but I've seen the movie and absolutely fell in love with ...

    Jun 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A bandits fortune

    Hey, Rocksmith. Let's see, overall. . really beautiful poem. And I mean beautiful. ^-^ You had such a wonderful way of articulating yourself and allowing the words to just fall ...

    Jun 30, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: American Cynic

    It's funny how normally lazy I am to read or review anything too long, unless it's requested. I read this and I'm hooked the entire way through. :o I think ...

    Jun 29, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: I can't

    Hey there. So, in general, I found your solid point a tad refreshing. It's not every day when someone decides to bring up a point in the bible to something ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Losing Love

    Okay. . this was truly a little heartbreaking. At first I was a little worried you wouldn't pull through with the proper emotion. At first it seemed a little "done-before" ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Collecting Hearts

    This had so many clean angles to it, I have to say that overall it was very nicely articulated. Your writing style seemed very spacy and unnecessarily lengthened, but by ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Untitled

    Okay, so I haven't really reviewed much poetry in awhile, so I hope this seems adequate enough. :lol: I really liked how in the beginning this seemed like it could ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Have You Lost Me

    This is really sick, Raz. ^-^ Do you sing or play guitar aside from writing song lyrics? Just curious. Yeah, I don't really review lyrics too often, but since this ...

    Jun 26, 2011


here is the deepest secret nobody knows (here is the root of the root and the bud of the bud and the sky of the sky of a tree called life; which grows higher than the soul can home or mind can hide) and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart i carry your heart (i carry it in my heart)
— e.e. cummings